1st draft of documentary feedback

This is the feedback for the 1st draft of my documentary i used google forms and sent the question to a group of people who had watched the 1st draft of my documentary. 

After getting the feedback i knew that a second draft was definitely needed. I was happy to get this feedback as i now knew that a lot of the issues with my 1st draft where post production related such as not having any b-roll footage or having some issues with audio.